LI:
To retell and describe an event or an experience.
Sentence starters.
Punctuation.
I’m ready to pounce, like a tiger watching its prey , my hand overs over my empty cup sitting on the hot concrete. Neves tingling I look around at the hot sunny day, birds chirp, kids shout and clouds are dotted around the bright blue skies suddenly I’m brought out of my trance “go!”
My feet scutter as I race toward the plastic bucket, my plastic cup sits between my fasinned lips I reach the bucket with too much speed I skid along the rough concrete, quickly dipping my cuo into the water before sticking it back between my lips. I feel a strange slightly tart taste on my mouth
I run back to where I started and tip myb water into my own. I repeat the process about 6 times, Ethan and I are head to head when time is called, I sigh and tip my head back in extraction beads of sweat threatening to pursue my skin.
Now that's what I call writing.
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 26 June 2020
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Wednesday, 17 June 2020
dead day story task.
LI:
To describe a setting in a story.
The -ING sentence.
Double the last consonant.
My story:
Chocolate gold leaves pave the deep, lush, green, grass. It’s wet under foot but not muddy. Shouting and clashing echoes from the gym. Busy kids surround me jotting down ideas. The wet blanket sky droops threatening to release a downpour. The weather is strange. It’s impossible to tell the time of day, gloomy and sad. It’s definitely effects my mindset (and not in a good way).
It’s thick with clouds, not a bird in sight. The day is so lifeless and so alive and the same time.
Thursday, 11 June 2020
writing task ( a white, large, friendly, robot?)
A white, large, friendly, robot stands in a busking street. Not something
you normally see as you commute to work. Heads turn peering at its simple
led eyes and smile, it looks so harmless with its slightly tack shell and smell of roses.
you normally see as you commute to work. Heads turn peering at its simple
led eyes and smile, it looks so harmless with its slightly tack shell and smell of roses.
I wouldn't be so sure.
This robot has the brain of 103 year old evil scientist Robert scoot. Before he transferred
his evil genius brain into his masterpiece robot. He was arrested for taking fire at some
kids with his laser gun prototype. He was charged with murder and prohibited firearms
and sentenced to life in prison. Somehow he managed to escape and his new goal is
world domination being 90 at the time he knew he was going to have to find a way to
have eternal life that's where the robot comes in.
his evil genius brain into his masterpiece robot. He was arrested for taking fire at some
kids with his laser gun prototype. He was charged with murder and prohibited firearms
and sentenced to life in prison. Somehow he managed to escape and his new goal is
world domination being 90 at the time he knew he was going to have to find a way to
have eternal life that's where the robot comes in.
Robert has spent the last 13 years creating this robot and it has finally come to life
“it beautiful!" whisper Robert . he stood and looked at it marvelling at its massive cuddly body it was
huge. about 8 foot it had a large belly where the computer went and a warm smile the made you want to give it a cuddle
“it beautiful!" whisper Robert . he stood and looked at it marvelling at its massive cuddly body it was
huge. about 8 foot it had a large belly where the computer went and a warm smile the made you want to give it a cuddle
“I will name it…”
Wednesday, 10 June 2020
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