I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
dead day story task.
LI:
To describe a setting in a story.
The -ING sentence.
Double the last consonant.
My story:
Chocolate gold leaves pave the deep, lush, green, grass. It’s wet under foot but not muddy. Shouting and clashing echoes from the gym. Busy kids surround me jotting down ideas. The wet blanket sky droops threatening to release a downpour. The weather is strange. It’s impossible to tell the time of day, gloomy and sad. It’s definitely effects my mindset (and not in a good way).
It’s thick with clouds, not a bird in sight. The day is so lifeless and so alive and the same time.
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