I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Mōrena Charlie, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
Well done on participating in the commenting activity.
I like that you’ve introduced yourself first and that your comment included some helpful feedback as well as a positive compliment of Ruby’s art in her blog post.
In the Summer Learning Journey, you get bonus points for commenting on other people’s posts, so you can get even more points for starting a comment thread. If you post a comment, they reply and you reply again, you create a back and forth conversation between you and the original blog poster. A good way to do this is to ask them questions. What are some questions you think you could ask to initiate a positive comment thread?
You’ve made a good start to the Summer Learning Journey, so well done! I’m looking forward to seeing more of your posts on the future activities.
Mōrena Charlie, this is Elle from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteWell done on participating in the commenting activity.
I like that you’ve introduced yourself first and that your comment included some helpful feedback as well as a positive compliment of Ruby’s art in her blog post.
In the Summer Learning Journey, you get bonus points for commenting on other people’s posts, so you can get even more points for starting a comment thread. If you post a comment, they reply and you reply again, you create a back and forth conversation between you and the original blog poster. A good way to do this is to ask them questions. What are some questions you think you could ask to initiate a positive comment thread?
You’ve made a good start to the Summer Learning Journey, so well done! I’m looking forward to seeing more of your posts on the future activities.
Ngā mihi,
Elle (SLJ)