I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Charlie, My Name is Jack I liked your slide show showing information that I did not know, about the Russian Arctic Convoy. I liked your slide show a lot because it shows pictures of the ship when it was frozen so we could see what it looked like and imagine how cold it would have been. It is also cool how you mention and show the book in your slide show. Something you could do better next time is to put capitals on your titles and you could put titles on each of your slides too. Your work is great, keep it up. You should check out my blog. https://karorojackt.blogspot.com/
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Charlie, My Name is Jack I liked your slide show showing information that I did not know, about the Russian Arctic Convoy. I liked your slide show a lot because it shows pictures of the ship when it was frozen so we could see what it looked like and imagine how cold it would have been. It is also cool how you mention and show the book in your slide show. Something you could do better next time is to put capitals on your titles and you could put titles on each of your slides too. Your work is great, keep it up. You should check out my blog. https://karorojackt.blogspot.com/
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