Police sirens wine the city is alight, people screaming and wailing fires writhe uncontrollably
along the oily ground. Nigel and Jim have just caused havoc in Oakland city and the cops
are after them. luckily they have a excellent plan, there're dressed up as animals! no won will
suspect a cat and a dog on a motorcycle. while they speed down the highway the authorities
are still in the city running around like headless chickens looking for the crooks,
Nigel an Jim are never going to get caught.
This is a very cool quick write. I love your adverb, w-word sentences. Maybe take time to check spelling and punctuation. You have some wonderful ideas for stories.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Charlie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really interesting piece of writing. The sentace i really like is the one where you say police sirens wine. Next time you should put some learning intesions in so that other people can see what you have been trying to acheive.
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