Thursday, 19 March 2020

Nigel's weekend mad Monday

The two stroke, racing NEOchrome bike's engine roars in my ears. My heart's in my throat
beating thousand times a second. I'm pumped with Adrenalin. I thrash uncontrollably up and
down the jumps. splat! I zoom straight through a massive puddle of mud I react stupidly
and cover my face "aaaahhhh" I go flying summer salting in the air. brown icky mud snails
down my sweaty face I'm winded and coughing up this morning banana cake. Blood trickles
down my  legs and I faint. 

1 comment:

  1. This is a really great quick write Charlie. I love your wow words you have used. We need to talk about how to use punctuation! Great story.

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