beating thousand times a second. I'm pumped with Adrenalin. I thrash uncontrollably up and
down the jumps. splat! I zoom straight through a massive puddle of mud I react stupidly
and cover my face "aaaahhhh" I go flying summer salting in the air. brown icky mud snails
down my sweaty face I'm winded and coughing up this morning banana cake. Blood trickles
down my legs and I faint.
This is a really great quick write Charlie. I love your wow words you have used. We need to talk about how to use punctuation! Great story.
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