I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 26 June 2020
Writing task re-telling an event
Thursday, 25 June 2020
Friday, 19 June 2020
Thursday, 18 June 2020
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
dead day story task.
LI:
To describe a setting in a story.
The -ING sentence.
Double the last consonant.
My story:
Chocolate gold leaves pave the deep, lush, green, grass. It’s wet under foot but not muddy. Shouting and clashing echoes from the gym. Busy kids surround me jotting down ideas. The wet blanket sky droops threatening to release a downpour. The weather is strange. It’s impossible to tell the time of day, gloomy and sad. It’s definitely effects my mindset (and not in a good way).
It’s thick with clouds, not a bird in sight. The day is so lifeless and so alive and the same time.
Thursday, 11 June 2020
writing task ( a white, large, friendly, robot?)
you normally see as you commute to work. Heads turn peering at its simple
led eyes and smile, it looks so harmless with its slightly tack shell and smell of roses.
his evil genius brain into his masterpiece robot. He was arrested for taking fire at some
kids with his laser gun prototype. He was charged with murder and prohibited firearms
and sentenced to life in prison. Somehow he managed to escape and his new goal is
world domination being 90 at the time he knew he was going to have to find a way to
have eternal life that's where the robot comes in.
“it beautiful!" whisper Robert . he stood and looked at it marvelling at its massive cuddly body it was
huge. about 8 foot it had a large belly where the computer went and a warm smile the made you want to give it a cuddle
Wednesday, 10 June 2020
Friday, 5 June 2020
Get creative art task
Apple phone review.
The Apple iPhone 6. A simple, affordable, reliable phone, Right?
That's what I thought until a couple of weeks ago.
My mum has had two iPhones and both of them have blacked out so much there are no longer fit to use her everyday phone.
She first bought a 5c (a fairly new model at the time) only for it to just go black.
I googled this problem and it happened to tonnes of people on the internet
Questions like:
What do you do if Your iPhone blacks out a lot?
My iPhone 6 has the black screen of death hat I do?
Apple has been getting in trouble for purposely slowing down there older models. While they claimed to be “preserving” the battery heath. In 2018 apple was charged over 8 million New Zealand dollars followed by another more recent charge of over 47 million dollars. You'd think that would stop Apple, I believe otherwise.
Maybe I’m wrong,
And If I’m wrong that's very bad of apple for even going down that track because now they've built up a bad reputation.