I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Thursday, 30 July 2020
healthy streams info report
an information report is were you describe a problem or a subject and show the important information about it. (and the who, what, where, when)
Healthy streams information report
80% of NZ rivers are poor quality. This is appalling. Farmers are getting lazy, polluting rivers with their cows and strip grazing. This process creates topsoil which eventually builds up in our rivers turning them to mucky brown trickles. What about the poor animals that live in that water? Fish, eels and critters. Otaki rivers are not so rural this should mean our streams and rivers don’t have problems with topsoil, therefore they should be a lot cleaner. ATN is about to find out...
Friday, 24 July 2020
Science-fiction character description
LI:
To add detail about a character.
Using elements of science fiction to create a character
Two men stand around a small syringe next to them is a tiny baby about the size of a tennis ball. The baby is lying on a piece of A4 paper that reads black male, 3 months early. Little did this baby know that the serum in the syringe would change his life forever.
That syringe contained alien DNA from mars.
14 years later
The squeak of shoes echoes around the gym. I watch as Ja effortlessly shoots one half court after another his short bangs wobble and beads of sweat purse his shiny temple and trickle down his bare chest “he’s not human” a kid jokes this make me chuckle as what the kid said Is actually true I created Ja in a lab. Though the experiment went wrong (he’s missing a leg) I think He came out great healthy, strong and so far nothing’s really gone wrong. “All right boys” Ja bellows in his deep voice “I’ll catch you guys later”. A kid mumbles goodbye and 6 foot ja promptly leaves the stuffy gym putting on his t-shirt on the way out.
I’ve been following Ja for quite A while now and every day he walks along the waterfront slightly limping with his fake leg. He follows a busking road up into the hills to his “foster” parents house when I say foster I say it sarcastically because no one actually lives there. He lives in a rundown rusty shed filled with computers and random gadgets he has created. Everytime I watch him he gets closer and closer to finding out everything.
But It’s my job to to only watch over him but stop him from finding out what really happened.
Friday, 3 July 2020
Wednesday, 1 July 2020
Get creative task
these shoes are for drake, ovo is his own own brand and drake likes basketball so I decided to design him some shoes.
Writing task
The blind fold wraps around my skull, turning my whole world pitch black. I bet I look ridiculous! I think to
myself. crackling tickles my ears, “Pop”. Suddenly butter and salt wafts up my nose, my mouth is watering.
It's just before lunch so I’ve worked up a nice appetite. my stomach begins growling at me, it's angry.
I can't wait any longer. My greedy hand dives longingly for the buttery, salty smell. I drag my hand blindly
across the table searching for the food, “gotcha’ once inside I grope for the buttery balls of goodness.
I lick my lips and pop the savoury into my mouth. A bit of salt… nothing. I try again, “BOOM” an explosion
of mouth watering goodness goes off on my palate and taste buds. Once it’s in my mouth my saliva works
fast dissolving the buttery goodness.
I Swallow and repeat.
myself. crackling tickles my ears, “Pop”. Suddenly butter and salt wafts up my nose, my mouth is watering.
It's just before lunch so I’ve worked up a nice appetite. my stomach begins growling at me, it's angry.
I can't wait any longer. My greedy hand dives longingly for the buttery, salty smell. I drag my hand blindly
across the table searching for the food, “gotcha’ once inside I grope for the buttery balls of goodness.
I lick my lips and pop the savoury into my mouth. A bit of salt… nothing. I try again, “BOOM” an explosion
of mouth watering goodness goes off on my palate and taste buds. Once it’s in my mouth my saliva works
fast dissolving the buttery goodness.
I Swallow and repeat.
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